Tune In Tuesday: Josh Ritter . . . Again
It’s no secret that I have a major crush on Josh Ritter’s music. (And let’s be honest, Josh Ritter.)
The other day I was in a very Ritter kind of mood and headspace while I was writing (I cannot write when in silence. Silence distracts me.) and “Naked as a Window,” a song that I’ve heard probably a million times came on.
But for some reason, this time it seemed louder than all the other times. It’s a short song—not even a minute and a half long. But it is gorgeous. It’s simple and honest and heartbreaking, but heartwarming too.
It really did a number on me and I put the sucker on repeat for about two days. It’s a quiet little thing and it slips under the radar pretty easily. I’m glad it decided to scream at me.
What I’m Writing: NaNoWriMo Week Three Update
This week in the wonderful world of writing-frenzy, I’m struggling a little.
I’m a few thousand words behind word count. I mean, not to the point that it’s going to be impossible to catch up, but still. I’m behind.
And it’s all because I think I’ve written my poor little characters into a corner that I am not a fan of, and I’m not quite sure how to get them out of it without GOING BACK and REVISING which are kind of the only NaNo-NoNos.
So. That.
And the only other way I can see getting the out of this stupid, pointy corner is to change the ending I’ve conceived of all along.
I am loath to do that.
When I started this, I had a very specific vision of the ending. It was going to be spectacular and breathtaking and leave my eventual-readers going “Oh!” But not in a cliffhanger-way. This was going to be in a “I-can’t-believe-she-did-that” kind of way. And I was all excited about it. The ending was what was really going to make this book different and leave every pub house IN THE WORLD clamoring to buy it up.*
And now I think I have to change it. Or go back and revise. Or something.
*headdesk*
So those are my writing woes for this week. Hopefully after going to brunch and getting day drunk and then seeing Breaking Dawn will give me some INSPIRATION. *grins*
And, for those of you who have any sort of interest in what my crazy draft-writing contains, here is your snippet for the week (Be warned! There are probs typos/word-choice issues. You may judge, just don’t judge too harshly.):
As I turned to go to the register, I ran into aperson. I still had my headphones in, so I mumbled an apology without lookingup and kept making my way to the front of store. But I realized I wasn’t goingvery far since the person I ran into had grabbed my hand, which was highlyweird. With my free hand I yanked the headphones out of my ears and whippedaround, trying all the while to free my enslaved hand.
“Um,please let go of . . . ” my words trailed off as my brain recognized the personI was looking at. Then I picked up again with, “You’ve got to be fuckingkidding me.” If there was ever any doubt I was a New Yorker through andthrough, it was all lost with that exclamation.
*I do not know if this is going to happen as I am not any sort of oracle or psychic. If I were, this whole writing a book endeavor would probably be MUCH EASIER.
TGIF: Giving Bookish Thanks
Waiting on Wednesday: Dreamless
Title: Dreamless (Starcrossed 2)
Author: Josephine Angelini
Publisher: HarperTeen
Pages: 400
Release Date: May 29, 2012
As the only Scion that can enter Hades at will, Helen descends to the Underworld in search of a way to overcome the Furies and end the cycle of revenge that has cursed the Scions. But she’s running out of time. Each descent weakens her both in mind and spirit. A mysterious stranger might be her only salvation, but the price may be her love for Lucas Delos.
As an unforgettable love triangle emerges, Josephine Angelini’s compelling saga becomes ever more intricate and spellbinding. The eagerly awaited sequel to the internationally bestselling Starcrossed, Dreamless delivers with a huge emotional impact that will leave readers satisfied—and longing for more.—Goodreads
So, I saw Immortals this past weekend. While I had a grand ol’ time watching the gore and the shirtlessness and Henry Cavill’s awesome spear attacks and spin moves and The Chick who Played Athena’s Buffy-inspired Fan Kicks of Doom, I found myself wanting something . . . else.
And I found myself thinking about Starcrossed, a book about demigods I read earlier this year. And then I remembered that there is to be a sequel! So I took my happy little self over to the Goodreads website and lo and behold there is a cover and a description and release date for the sequel, Dreamless.
And it’s going to be all kinds of hellish with Miss Helen going off to Hades and chillin’ with those kids. And apparently one of them is a mysterious stranger. Interest = peaked.
Waiting on Wednesday is a weekly meme hosted by Jill at Breaking the Spine.
Reactionary Reading: Shatter Me
Half sleeves, dark hair, and blue eyes?! THIS IS MY DREAM GUY. RIGHT HERE. IN THIS BOOK.
I’m really diggin’ the use of the strike through.
OMG and his name is Adam. Oh man. I hope he turns out to be a good guy and not a colossal asshole.
p. 23: “I realize for the first time that he’s not wearing a shirt.” HOW ARE YOU JUST NOW REALIZING THIS NAMELESS GIRL?!
p. 26: Lackadaisical! I LOVE the word lackadaisical! Also, the word ennui, which is the word right after lackadaisical. Holy Jesus, I love Tahereh Mafi.
This sentence is brilliant: “I hate the lackadaisical ennui of a sun too preoccupied with itself to notice the infinite hours we spend in its presence.”
OMG Tahereh Mafi is 23! I am so wasting my life.
p. 41: “There are fifteen thousand feelings of disbelief hole-punched in my heart.”
p. 48: ADAAAAAAAAM. Well. I still have hope.
p. 53: “There are wire cutters carving holes in my heart.”
Chapter Eleven is effing heartbreaking.
p. 73: “I hope I disappoint Warner in every possible way.” Get it girl.
Mafi has such a way with words. Her verbs! And metaphors! Good GOD this lady can write.
p. 121: I. Am. SOBBING.
p. 123: I love that all of her dresses have pockets. Pocket dresses are THE BEST.
p. 130-131: The evisceration of women who use child leases is INCREDIBLE.
I don’t really know how I feel about No-First-Name Warner. I mean, obvs he’s AWFUL, but there’s also something else going on. Or maybe I’m getting Stockholm Syndrome from this book.
BTW: Adam. Still swooning over that one.
p. 141: “I want to cripple his cockiness with the palm of my hand.” DOUBLE ENTENDRE FTW.
p. 148: Oh holy, yes.
p. 150: Oh hells bells. I bet Warner is going to deny that he gave Adam permission to dismantle the cameras/mics. Ohhh I’m so preemptively mad.
p. 156: “He squeezes me against his chest and I marvel at the power, the glory, the wonder in such a simple movement.”
p. 159: Aaaaaand I’m crying again.
p. 171: Wait. She can break through walls?!
p. 174-176: YES PLEASE.
“My fingers are tugging at the them of his wet clothes and his eyes widen for only a second before he rips the material off himself. He grabs my hands and lifts my arms above my head and pins me against the wall, kissing me until I’m sure I’m dreaming, drinking in my lips with his lips and he tastes like rain and sweet musk and I’m about to explode.“ O_O
Ok, now that she’s all with Adam, I’m now wary of him. I’m all kinds of concerned he’s not as great as I think he is and that Warner was actually trying to save her from him. Or something. But that’s obvs crazy right? RIGHT?!
p. 231: DEAR. GOD. The pants-melting.
p. 243: I love that she loves guns.
p. 266: ROAR.
p. 269: “He tastes like peppermint, smells like gardenias.” HE’S A DUDE. DUDES SHOULDN’T SMELL THAT WAY.
p. 296: Ok. For some reason I’m just NOW starting to wonder why some people can touch her and others can’t. When it was just Adam, I was like WHEEEE. And then when Warner could I was like, Well, ok, that sort of figures. BUT NOW. My brian is catching up or something because I’m like, “Wait. How does this work?!”
p. 302: WTF is going on?
The tonal shift has totally caught me off guard.
When’s Warner gonna show up again? Because I’m pretty positive he is NOT dead.
But if he is, awesome. . . . although. He was such a good villain.
p. 314: So . . . we’re now at the Xavier School for Gifted Youngsters?
p. 316: Awe, I love Brendan.
p. 338: “I offer Adam a blank stare. He grins, “Try it on.” I stare differently.”
Hmm. That book was a whirlwind of THINGS. MANY MANY THINGS.















